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'Mortal as I am, I know that I am born for a day. But when I follow at my pleasure the serried multitude of the stars in their circular course, my feet no longer touch the earth.'
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Subject: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:21 am
So the guy I asked you for rap to send to sent me a beat. It's pretty dope and I wrote a rap to it. I'm posting it here to have it saved somewhere reliable. I'll post the beat as soon as I'm able too and then me rapping to it if I can record it to any satisfaction.
Yow
Yow
Mm
Saliste Como un espiritu oscuro de la tierrra condenandome a un reinado sin tierras con fieras escapando y convirtiendome y peleando con quimeras Cuando los dioses mandaron sus regalos mas preciosos tu fuiste de las primeras en romperlos todos y crear el verdadero gozo Reboso Al pensar en aquellos subditos tuyos y el amor deseoso Y si, tal vez fui peresozo Cuando pienso en ti todavia lloro Y me lleno de un dolor que me hace querer quemar al mundo o lanzarlo al foso Pero sigo aqui con mi penoso camino sin ti Recordando siempre lo que alguna vez nunca fui Digno de ti Digno de ti... Si creyera en Dios rezara todos los dias por ti Pero como no creo pienso tembloroso en lo que te espera Lo que habras pasado en todos estos anos Me tranquilizo al pensar que reclamas instantanea la lealtad de los humanos Y que siempre la tierra podra decir que caminaste sobre ella
Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:28 am
Thats fantastic dude. Tentacles and shit.
id also like to learn some Spanish through your raps.
Como un espiritu oscuro de la tierrra condenandome a un reinado sin tierras con fieras
Like a dark spirit of the earth, condemned to a reign without lands, with pride
?
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:29 am
Sent you the beat by email, maybe you can post it. Chrome is a terrible fucking operating system.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:31 am
Como un espiritu oscuro de la tierrra condenandome a un reinado sin tierras con fieras
Like a dark spirit from the earth or the soil (from referring to saliste, you came out, though I guess of would indeed then be more accurate)
condemning me to a dark kingdom with no lands with... huh... wild creatures I guess. There is no word for fieras.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:32 am
Fiera I guess is a creature made of fierce.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:33 am
Something in any case to fear and contend with.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:42 am
I guess kingdom would be reino and reinado more reign, but reinado includes kingdom in a way reign doesn't.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:47 am
Now that I think of it, he probably made this beat thinking of his father. He loved him very much, but he was a crack addict and he saw little of him. Enough to yearn for him.
He died about a year ago from lung faliure, in the middle of the street.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:49 am
Sent him the lyrics. Hope I made him cry.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:53 am
Lol he didn't cry. Hard motherfucker. Ares. Of Sirian-Cuban descent (very much not the former nazi).
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:56 am
He did say "verga! poderoso, poderoso..." and promised to send more.
Verga means cock, though when referring to cock is somewhat archaic, and is the Venezuelan "Oh shit" par excelence.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 10:58 am
Oh shit for danger or impressiveness.
Cono (with the n with the squiggly line on top, cognio) is the allfather of oh shits, but more calm and self aware. Used a lot for exasperation or an expected surprise or pain. Means cunt, and again, a little archaic when used to refer to cunt. Maybe not in Spain.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 11:08 am
Yow
Yow
Mm
Saliste Como un espiritu oscuro de la tierrra condenandome a un reinado sin tierras con fieras escapando y convirtiendome y peleando con quimeras Cuando los dioses mandaron sus regalos mas preciosos tu fuiste de las primeras en romperlos todos y crear el verdadero gozo Reboso Al pensar en aquellos subditos tuyos y el amor deseoso Y si, tal vez fui peresozo Cuando pienso en ti todavia lloro Y me lleno de un dolor que me hace querer quemar al mundo o lanzarlo al foso Pero sigo aqui con mi penoso camino sin ti Recordando siempre lo que alguna vez nunca fui Digno de ti Digno de ti... Si creyera en Dios rezara todos los dias por ti Pero como no creo pienso tembloroso en lo que te espera Lo que habras pasado en todos estos anos Me tranquilizo al pensar que reclamas instantanea la lealtad de los humanos Y que siempre la tierra podra decir que caminaste sobre ella
Yow...
Mi fiera...
Genesis...
La Reina
Yo
Yo
Uh
You came out Like a spirit of darkness from the earf Condemning me to a kingdom with no lands with tigers around Escaping from and becoming and fighting chimeras When the Gods sent their most precious gifts you were one of the first to break them all and create true joy I rejoice (reboso is more technically overflow) When I think of those your subjects and the desiring love And yes, maybe I was lazy When I think of you I still cry And I'm filled with a pain that makes me want to burn the world down or throw it into the pit But I'm still here in my painful path that lacks you Remembering always what I once never was Worthy of you Worthy of you... If I believed in God I would pray every day for you But since I don't believe I wonder shakily at what will become of you What you will have gone through in all these years It calms me down to think that you command instant loyalty from humans And that always the Earth will be able to say that you walked it
Yo...
My lioness...
Genesis...
The Emperess
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 11:17 am
Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 11:46 am
Nice. I just got caught up in a creative frenzy after trying to find space to upload - Anyway unfortuntely audiomack, where I still have space, doesn't accept the Opus file even though my Mac eats it.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 12:04 pm
It is for the best...
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 9:22 pm
He sent me another one. It's funky.
Ando caminando tranquilazo Llevo mi laso Componiendo este verso como Mimi Lazo Soy el diablazo No me preguntes como vivo Pergunta cuanto calzo Tengo un consejo de generales No trato con soldado raso Asi es que siempre el cielo alcanzo Y cuando los pajaros me ven siempre me dan un gran abrazo
Asi es hermanin salimos desde abajo No creemos en cadenas, creemos en relajo Siempre que nos vemos en problemas sacamos tajos Y convertimos enemigos en desparpajos Desde los bajos mundos hasta los altos Son lo mismo para mi, soy un gato Libre como un pato Ato matos de tomate para pasar el rato Cato ramos de corianto tanto como mato Cuando los pacos me ven piensan que soy un espanto Y cuando los fantasmas me ven siempre les canto Soy un encanto Y cerca de mi siempre llevo puras joyas como Marlon Brando Las almas de los inocentes voy comprando Toy ahorrando Para el dia en que se presente mi verano Y despues veran lo que es real como un marrano Que mandaron a matar para alimentar a una legion de malos Porque solo los malos son los que llamo mis hermanos
Yow
Desde los infiernos de Caracas
Hermano
Nunca olvidaremos a los que atras dejamos
Im walking calmly (Tranquilo, calm, -azo, a suffix that's very hard to describe. Like -ito but denoting a nice warm feeling the thing gives you rather than an impression of smallnes) I got my lasso Composing this verse like Mimi Lazo I'm the cool devil Don't ask me how I live Ask me my shoe size Got a council of generals Don't deal with privates That's how the sky I always reach And when the birds see me they always give me a big hug
That's how it is little brother we come from the bottom We don't believe in chains, we believe in law dee daw Whenever we find ourselves in trouble we take slices And turn enemies into sorry things From the bottom worlds to the top ones They're the same to me, I'm a cat Free as a duck (which in vzla is also a word for faggot) I tie together tomato plants to pass the time I taste (catar refers specifically to the art of wine tasting) branches of orchids as much as I kill When pigs see me they think I'm an evil apparition And when ghosts see me I always sing to them I'm a charm And near me I always have a bunch of jewels (a term in vzla for bad apples) like Marlon Brando The souls of the innocent I'm buying (voy comprando is a kind of present tense that continues on from I always have) I'm saving up For the day my summer presents itself And then they'll see what's real like a pig (the animal this time) That they took to slaughter to feed a legion of bad men 'Cause only bad men I call brothers
Yo
From the hells of Caracas
Brother
We'll never forget those who behind we left
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 9:27 pm
Lol his response was "that's cool, I imagined some shit like that"
That's after he noted how any verse that includes Marlon is good.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Wed Jul 18, 2018 9:48 pm
Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Thu Jul 19, 2018 5:49 am
Speaking of Marlon, I'm just reading a book on Marlon Brando in Japan, by truman Capote. I found it lying in the bicycle path in the hot sun. It speaks now of the kimonoed maid of the hotel completing his dinner order for him: "and appa-pie, Marron?"
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Thu Jul 19, 2018 6:44 am
Appa-pie....
I'm just gonna send him the ganga thieves PZR freestyle
Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Fri Jul 20, 2018 8:33 am
Do you still have that first freestyle you did in Caracas?
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Fri Jul 20, 2018 11:41 am
Don't even remember it. I'll fish around.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Fri Jul 20, 2018 12:02 pm
Ah, that's right, the fascists at rehab made me delete one of my two old accounts. 50/50 that's where that freestyle was.
Well, fascists... Sure, but I still love 'em. Only people on earf probably that would never turn me down (though they could send me to a looney bin if I came fucked up enough, last time they told me that had it been anyone else, they would have). Good people, trying to do something about the suffering of the hardcore poeple in Venezuela.
Helped a lot, in any case.
But I'll keep fishing.
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Subject: Re: A Talented Artist Fri Jul 20, 2018 12:19 pm